Tuesday, July 26, 2011

"NEMESIS"

                                                                                                   NEMESIS



Into the poem: The name of the poem ‘NEMESIS’ meaning destiny is about a lovers destiny in love. The poem is a kind of a pallinode on hope. The whole scene of the poem is presented in a beach during sunset. It speaks of a lover’s sanity towards love.


Plot: The poem speaks about a deserted lover who losses her beloved. The poem starts with the eyes of the girl, whom the guy chases down a lonely beach. Suddenly the girl’s leg hit a stone and her anklet breaks off. The girl keeps running and the guy runs to pick the anklet which he once presented her as gift. After picking up the anklet, the guy looks for her beloved but he doesn’t find her. It seems as if she’s lost. The guy cries for her, but all his shouts go in vain as he isn’t able to trace her. Broken with his heart, The guy sits on a rock and waits for the day until she returns





Poem:


Down she went looking but my eyes,
Crushing the pebbles, towards the drowning sun ran her bare feet,
It were the eyes that shifted the curse of my lone,
For the blackened bulb glistened the kiss of love,
The showers that sprinkle, The roses that mingle,
Nothing seemed mystique but her eyes.




Splashing the wave’s orange water,running went she.
Chasing her footprints did run my heart,
She’s the one for whom it beats,
She is the beauty of my nimble nemesis, My life is she.
My hoofs paused for a moment and eclipsed the queer,
As her legs staggered against the stone unseen, which tore her anklet round.




She didn’t halt her wavering legs, but running kept she,
Dwindling went her grey shadow over the blistering silt,
For I crawled my eyes to chase but a memoir of love,
Here and there and everywhere did trench my eyes,
And alas did spot the gift, sneaking about a gloomy crag.
Tempted to apprise her charm, zipped my heart and picked it up.




For the moment I smiled and looked for her,
But she was gone, Lost in the allusion of a deserted flight,
I cried, I screamed, I squalled out loud,
But nothing of her being was traced nor found.
She infringed my feelings and poisoned my love,
She Shattered my beats with the curse of lone.




My eyes wont scorn for her brazen deed,
Nor would it efface the look of her alluring feet,
I wont refute her love for delusion’s distaste,
And bitter the memories which were once sweet,
But would wait over this stone, Until the day she returns,
And fight my Patience till the remainent conceals.



                                                                                                                   - Rukshan Ur Rahman 

10 comments:

  1. I cn jst say 1 thing.....This poem was very very stirring.....I m nt exaggerating, bt I dnt knw why I m crying.....I cn sort of feel the pain tht the lover is going thru.....I cn also enjoy the taste of the pain.....I cn also feel the bliss of tht unending wait.....Rukshan bhai.....one gem of a poem.....thanks fr writing smthng so moving.....I cnt speak mre coz I cnt find words....truly u r gifted.....God Bless u!

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  2. Pratikshya dear: I'm so sorry, Tat my work made uh cry...!1 I never Intend to do so. It jus a poem having a bit of relevance with my personal life. Thankz for Your appreciation...!! Wont forget This comment for Sure...

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  3. Gr8 yaar...we all find thoughts...dnt get d ri8 words to express dem..
    Superb job... :))

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  4. hey dear! congratulations! yo' finally succeeded in making someone cry which certainly shows the effect of yo' words! n personally itz just a lovely piece n the wau yo' hv presented it makes it look to b " A POETRY IN MOTION"
    DO KEEP WRITING COZ SOME PEOPLE REALLY LIKE YOUR WORK!
    when i used to say yo' thot it to b a flatter btw it was neva' so!

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  5. @^: Thankz Dear Aakruti, I would Really wont forget your words, It was you who fuelled me back my morale..!! thankz for commenting..!! can't say anything more than This, Sometimes Silence is the best way of forwarding your emotions..!!

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  6. So emotional and heart touching..just loved it..

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  7. thanks for visited . nice poems . have a nice day

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