Sunday, September 23, 2012

"Just Love You"


Into The Poem: After a long period of poetic impotency, My nerves thrived to pen down some of my emotions about my Riza. And here is its formulation. 'Just Love You', a poem I wrote while reflecting my thoughts sitting near the banks of river Mahanadi. Hope you like it. If worth appealing don't forget to hit a comment and click on the 'Share' button.



Poem:
My burned and choked and dead heart,
Now breathes and sips a new leash of life,
As the curling winds touch my lips,
They burst those buried emotions at heart,
And make me fall in love again,
For all I've, is nothing but you,
For all I'll be, Will be for you,
For all I can is just love you.

A sea of words outlaw my lips to move,
But the hands of clock wont permit my mind,
I still remember those days, those days of distance,
They stalk me, they haunt me and crush me in bizzare nights.
Blind is the day, a day spent in vain,
Blind are my eyes without your view,
For I can fight my life and fight for you,
For all I can is just love you.

My love isn't just a relation of tangled emotions,
But the hush attachment of souls,
My life is in your arms, tears with your silence,
My beats in your beats, soaked with your beauty's rain.
For my love is pure, pure as the course of a fallen dew,
Turn all your sadness and turn to me,
Hug me deep, until I die with you,
For all I can is just love you.

Some moments of yours, the moments with mine,
They relent my thoughts and make me smile,
Your head falling on my shoulders and you hugging from behind,
The calmed body of yours, inclined to mine,
And that walk with me, are the memoirs I have,
My Shona, stand for me against those few,
And hold my hands, those hands waiting for you.
For all I want is to just love you.

My life is not meant to love and to be loved in return,
But to hold on with those promises when inside it churns,
I'm yours and you're mine, for all our life to go,
For you can screen my blood and halt their temptuous flow,
Kiss me whenever I'm alone,
For whom I can kiss, is just kiss you,
Drown me in your eyes, For my world is you.
Love me alike, as I just love you.
                                                   - Rukshan Ur Rahman




8 comments:

  1. The poem has a rare flow, like the ones in Neruda's love poems. The words are not clustered or organized, they are random, yet they make perfect sense......like a rush of passion or a moment of infidelity....where nothing can be explained, just felt. Hard to describe....beautiful.

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    1. Yes Dear, Ofcourse it was one with a random flow..!! But from within.. Phrased up the whole poem while sitting down on the Banks of Mahanadi...!! Hope you liked it..

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  2. I could relate myself writing this poem... I mean this just boils with emotions especially the last but one para... Love it as usual Rukshan.. Again another gem in your already gem laden feathers...

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    1. Bravo! A comment from youis what I Wait for.. Thanks sir, Thanks a ton..! Hope will try recreating this emotions everytime!!

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  3. arey yaar kana lekhichu... "KAWSOME"
    Its really heart touching... mana ku chuin delu sanga.. i'm literallly crying... Carry on the good job dude...

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    1. Sanga tame bhi Lol Kari daucha..!! "literally crying" sanga ta tike adhika hei gala..!! But thanks o you that you enjoyed reading it...!!

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  4. Its an awesome poem.. Very lovely n heartouching lines,an urestricted flow of feelings....especially 3rd & last stanza lines...mesmerizing..

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    1. Thanks Sanjeeta! indeed it was my unrestricted flow of feelings.. Glad you liked it...

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